Choppywings unshaded

The overall design of this is pretty good. The clothing folds look pretty good but the ones on the left arm (right side of the picture) perhaps look a bit too bunched up. As far as anatomy goes, its also pretty good. I would suggest though that the legs may be a bit to short in comparison to the arms and the body is a bit to long as well. Also, the feet might be too small.

I like the effect that the hue shift on the hair has, but not so much on the pants. I'm not sure exactly why, but it seems maybe a little too bright for the rest of the colors or something.

The hair looks nice but could use some more volume. There could be a little more space between the edge of the hair and where the edge of the head would be.

You did a very nice job. I really like your style. Keep up the good work. ^_^